Kam – Overall you had a strong paper with a clear thesis. You incorporated many strong quotes and did a good job analyzing them to work for you and in terms of your narrative. There were certain places I commented on adding more information about your life and other places where you could use a quote to enhance your own thoughts and ideas. I really enjoyed reading your conclusion because I felt the reader can easily relate to the “storyline” of it and it has a catchy ending. As far as the multimodal aspect of this paper I thought you did very well. I enjoyed the formatting of it and how you took the important quotes in bold and centered them. The pictures I thought painted a good ovberatching theme of growth. The video I found interesting to use in regards quoting McAdams, it works very well. Finally, I think this was well written, once you improve on those few small aspects.
Great. I ‘m glad that you also commented on your peer’s multimodal choices. If you choose to showcase this peer review in your final ePortfolio, please also black out Lacey’s name, as well.
These images look perfect, by the way! Job well done!