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Copy of English Paper 1 – Metaphors

There is a pattern, I tend to use very simple words. For example I say “but”, “so” and “this relates to” very often. Instead of doing this it would be beneficial in future writing to look up synonyms and other transition words to make my work more interesting. Not only this but I tend to just repeat phrases and relate them to the general theme in different ways. This can be fixed again by using synonyms to get similar ideas across using different words.